[the grin on her oozes with wicked intent—not dangerous, but lecherous, her canines blinding and yearning for something to sink themselves into. a thought breezes by, one that sharon could catch if she listens very carefully. 'you're a real tease, rabbit.'
she should devour her right here and now for that, but as she promised herself, she will continue to let sharon do their driving and have her do all the twists and turns. even if the urge of taking the wheel to steer them to a rocky and forbidden road is so damn alluring.]
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she should devour her right here and now for that, but as she promised herself, she will continue to let sharon do their driving and have her do all the twists and turns. even if the urge of taking the wheel to steer them to a rocky and forbidden road is so damn alluring.]